Score: 6

"Nice, but..."

submission: Christian Quotes

date: October 4, 2007

It could use both a preloader and buttons that allow you to move back and forth between quotes, rather than setting the quotes at a play speed.

I recognized a couple of these, though I haven't heard all of them.

This could have used a little more than just quotes though. Some animation or interaction would have been nice.

Score: 10

"Fantastic."

submission: Metropolis Circuit

date: September 8, 2007

Smooth, fast paced, colorful animation. Loved it. And despite the few cheesy lines in the movie, the voice acting was well done.

Reminds me a lot of this game "Jet Grind Radio" or "Jet Set Radio". I can't remember which name it is.

All in all, professional looking stuff. You have a great style.

Score: 6

"Shows potential..."

submission: Stick adventures game

date: July 12, 2007

...but needs a lot of work.

1) Show some controls at the least. Instructions or a tutorial would be better.

2) Make it so the stick figure moves WITH the moving platforms. IT should be something like

/*assuming you have a variable called MovingPlatformMovement that decides where the platform is going.*/

onClipEvent(enterFrame){
if(StickFigure.hitTest(MovingP latform)){
if(MovingPlatformMovement == -10){
StickFigure._x -= 10;
}else{
if(MovingPlatformMovement == 10){
StickFigure._x +=10;
}
}
}

Hopefully that will get you started on that part.

3)Compress your sound. Cut what you have into shorter loops and make sure to compress your audio when you export your Flash. The file size of this game was too big for what it was.

4)Add some power-ups!
Make it a little more fun than jumping and dodging. Throw some jet-packs, springs, lasers, teleporters and all sorts of goodies in there!

5)Re-submit as a whole new game. Because if you've done all that it will be a whole new game!

Hope this helps!